Quote by aozoraskiesYou certainly are talented! I like the details and colours...Thee is a very nice sheen on their hair and Shuurei's robes and headdress are very orientally detailed at the top. The two mice are cute hanging about the cherry tree....oh wait did you take "cherry blossom" and made it "cherry and blossom"...maybe cherry trees really do put out flowers, I don't know; there aren't any around here...

As much as I like your style, I have to complain about how grainy it can look sometimes. Gomen! But is this because you had problems scanning it? (If it is, I totally understand; I don't have a scanner so I had to pass my drawings to a friend to scan and they came back so messed-up, I dare not post them on Minitokyo...sob. So many of my textures and lines went missing...)

Or is it because you are using waxy colour pencils? They are good for Shuurei's headdress, sleeves, hair and the red part of the robe as well as those leaves on Ryuuki and his front locks...but overall, I feel that there's a bit too much texture...It's okay for some of the other pieces you have done but for some... Maybe get some less waxy pencils and mix the two medias? Might be interesting....

Thank you so much, don't worry, I like your critique, it's very constructive & will help me make better in future ^^.
Maybe cuz this time I change the scanner, for this piece I scan it with my friend scanner, usually I scan it with my brother scanner, but my brother take the scanner to his apartment now, so I ask my friend to scan it for me, this piece is certainly look very grainy compared to my other drawing. .
As for colour pencil, I don't know for sure, I always use Faber Castell water colour pencil for my colouring, is it waxy or not?

Oh, this is beautiful.
So colorful ^__^

Oh sweet little red hood ^__^

this is really sweet scen ^^
Thank you for sharing

this is really amazing scan.
love the background.

Wow, I like it.
The dolphin is so beautiful & shiny.
Really good at full view ^^